On his blog he was recently asked the following:
I keep seeing different opinions on the use of 'said'. Some people say that said should be substituted for other words, like 'argued' or 'murmured', etc. But I've seen other people saying that publishers actually dislike that and prefer said to be used more. As a published author, which have you found is truer?His answer is essentially what I have been telling you guys all year:
“Said’s” are invisible. They vanish onto the page. The eye barely sees them — they become one with the inverted commas that indicate that something is being said. They’re the arrows on the speech balloons that show you who’s saying what. Lots of authors, when they start out, remember from school that you shouldn’t repeat words too much, and are careful to replace each “said” with “growled” “uttered” “yelped’ “hissed” “exclaimed” “asseverated” “muttered” “affirmed” and so on, and cannot work out why people dismiss the writing as amateurish. Use them, but use them sparingly. It’s like salt in a dish. Too much and it’s all you taste.I stand vindicated.
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